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Hello Crecious, I think your composition works, however, I think the figure could either go past the canvas border on the left side whe...


Cardenus, I like the colors used in this piece. The red has decent contrast with the figures. The black splats were an interesting solu...


Hello, I’ll start off by saying I’m a sucker for dramatic light so cheers :) I think your color palette works well. The composition also...


Hello TheSAOVaporeon, I like the idea behind this piece. Composition-wise it was a good call to place the figure off-center within 2/3 ...

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Hello Crecious,

I think your composition works, however, I think the figure could either go past the canvas border on the left side where the front of the mane is or moved to the right for a little more space. I think your colors are working, but the values are all fairly close. Currently, the harness is what stands out the most for me. I think this piece could benefit from more contrast; for instance, darkening some of the shadows and strokes in the hair. The drawing is pretty good, but maybe varying the line weight in certain areas such as in the mane to push it forward could be a nice touch. The lighting in some areas could be improved, such as in the mouth where the top portion would cast darker shadows over the tongue and harness. Also, the eyelids could use more shadows to suggest their shape and mass more. Overall, I think the drawing was done fairly well, your provocative expression was successful, and I really enjoyed the painterly strokes in the mane.

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Aleltg Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Student Artist
Thanks for watching, and nice work, if you need suggestion for some piece in the future ask!
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Payure Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
No problem. And thx 😄
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foreverEvey Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for watching! You have beautiful paintings in your gallery! Boogie! 
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mylesillustration Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Professional General Artist
Thanks so much for the watch!
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Payure Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Np. I like your art, especially your steam punk stuff.
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Welcome to Deviantart!~ *^*
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Payure Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you, heh.
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:iconsmilealittlebrighter:
Welcome!!~ ^ ^
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